Talk:Enar - Archivist/@comment-178.167.197.250-20130526223418

Really enjoyed this part. You got amazing skill to write about places and situations in a way that takes reader right into the story. Is it intended that the character lacks visual description?

PS.I think a coma is missing in that sentence -- "His suit rumpled and his trousers still wet above the hems from walking outside the man held up a thick paper binder."

Great job!