Talk:Day 1 - Scene 1/@comment-82.230.16.83-20130519215546/@comment-83.252.40.175-20130525210007

Nice with the intro! Are we supposed to know what anfylks are before reading, or is that to be discovered later? All fine if that (discovery) is the case, at least we know what kind Enar is. Would it make sense to know his age? I imagine him as being in his 30's, human age.

Style; I would say "the window through which he was looking out", about where the coat is. But just an idea!